literature

Psycho Liz's story part 1

Deviation Actions

xxxMind-Freakxxx's avatar
Published:
386 Views

Literature Text

Liz was a tomboyish, playful, and easy-going child. She is five years old, fair-skinned, with jet black hair cut bluntly over her soft brows. Her brown eyes, slender frame, and monochrome wardrobe gave her the appearance of a sweetly dark little child. Her and her brother, age 10, would play video games and outside together, she is extremely close to him and loves her father very much, but her relationship with her mother is hollow. Her mother is always out, coming home late hardly seeing her. Her mother and father had been married for 14 years, they were a loving couple but now they seem to be more distant and would argue constantly.

One night, Liz was sleeping in her room until a disturbance woke her up. She heard yelling and something shattering. Curious she followed the noise that lead up to the living room, she was hiding behind the curtains that covered the living room entrance, she peeks through and she sees her father being slapped across the face by her mother, she didn't believe what she was seeing. She was about to rush in and try to stop the fight however she was stopped by her brother holding her back and covering her mouth. The mother throws her wedding ring onto the floor and stomps her way out of the house slamming the door, the father left miserable; saying "What an unfaithful woman..." covering his face crying. Liz and her brother come in and goes up to their father and without any words, they embrace him.

The father found out that his own wife cheated on him, they ended up getting a divorce and he took custody of Liz and her brother. They move into a new place. The father makes good money at his job. Liz is 9 years old now. She was in her room playing with her rag doll, her father calls her and her brother.

"Liiiiiz, Jaaaaack, both of you come down here for a second!" he was at the living room down stairs. they both go, while going down stairs she sees a beautiful woman with curly dirty blonde hair and has a hourglass figure.

"Liz, Jack, this is Jessica"

"How nice to meet both of you, you guys are so cute" said Jessica

"Jessica will be moving in with us" said the father

Liz wasn't happy to hear the news, but seeing how happy her father looked, she accepted her. Ever since the separation of her parents, she hated seeing her father so sorrowful and now she is glad that her father has found someone that makes him happy.

"N-nice to meet you" said Liz, trying to smile.

Jack wasn't happy at all, he left to his room without saying a word and slammed his door.

"I'm sure, he just needs to warm up to you, that's all" said the father

Liz wasn't so sure why Jack was so upset, she goes up stairs and knocks at his door.

"Jack, what's wrong?" asked Liz, "Can you open the door?"

Jack unlocks his door and lets her in.

"What's wrong? Is it about that lady?"

"Yes...don't tell dad this, but I don't trust that woman" said Jack

"Why? she seems really nice and also she makes daddy happy"

"I know but...look just be careful, ok?"

"Ok"

Liz wasn't so sure why he was so uncertain about this woman, she was a bit confused. But she'd rather not say anything and just keep this conversation between them.

A couple of months passed, Jessica has been doing all the cleaning, cooking and will take Liz to the park sometimes. She started to warm up to her, seeing her as a mother figure. Jack still didn't like her, Jessica tried to talk to him, but he would ignore her and would stay in his room.

On a Saturday, the father needed to go to work, he left Jessica in charge. It was nighttime, Liz and Jack were playing hide-and-seek but in the dark only using a flashlight. Jack was it and Liz was hiding under the living room coffee table, he was in the living room flashing his light around, but then he got startled when he heard Jessica coming down stairs, he hides under the coffee table turning off his flashlight.

"HAH YOU FOU-" Jack immediately covers Liz's mouth.

Jessica was talking on the phone.

"I found myself a juicy sucker, he's got a great house and makes tons of money, he is such a fool, I'm getting really tired of playing house wife around here, his daughter is so dense and his son is such a brat, once I get all the money I am so out of here, hahahaha"

Jack got furious and came out of the coffee table.

"Well, looks I was right about you, I knew I couldn't trust you, leave here and don't you dare come back!" shouted Jack

"Oh, it looks like I got caught red handed, oh well, what's a little kid like you going to do about it? tell your daddy? You know he ain't going to listen you, he'll listen to me, you can't do anything. Now if you stand my way believe me you don't want to do that"

Jack forms his hand into fist and he tries to attack her however when he does, Jessica pulls out a syringe out of her coat and injects him on the neck, Liz shouts "WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MY BROTHER!!" she runs towards the woman and tries to save him but Jessica kicks her in the stomach with her high heel; she flies across the room near the chimney, she falls to the floor whimpering. Then she sees her brother twitching rapidly on the floor and his eyes rolled back.

"I knew this brat was going to be in my way, so I decided to know a little bit more about him, turns out he is allergic to penicillin, I could have easily knifed him but I'd rather have something more specific for this kid, plus I wouldn't want to make a mess of blood now wouldn't I hehe" laughed Jessica.

Liz is shocked, heartbroken witnessing her brother's demise, she was frozen with fear she starts to cry. The woman walks up to Liz, she lifts Liz's chin up and looks at her in the eye.

"As for you, let's keep this our little secret, or else I'll hurt your precious daddy"

Liz gets mad and slaps her face, angering the woman, she pins her onto the ground and starts to choke her.

"Kid you shouldn't have done that, I really didn't want to kill you but I guess I have to, you are nothing but a weak child"

Liz, desperately trying to find anything to help her break from her grasp, then she grabs a chimney tool that was in the chimney, it was red hot making it easier for her to pierce into the woman's skin, she stabs her in the rib cage. The woman lets go of Liz, groaning in pain, to Liz's advantage she starts to furiously murder the woman. Liz was terrified closing her eyes murdering the woman.

Her father comes in, the father is astonished, Liz looks at her father, it remained quiet for a few seconds. When Liz tried to go to her father; reaching out her hand.

"Daddy..."

"NO, STAY THE HELL AWAY FROM ME YOU...YOU FREAK!" shouted the terrified father

The father then runs out abandoning her.

Liz breaks into tears and she starts crawling to her brother's corpse and starts crying on his chest. Liz started to feel tense in her head, she was starting to feel sick, and started hearing voices. She begins to freak out kicking and yelling, the police arrives and rushes towards her

"HEY WHAT'S WRONG!?"

Eventually she just black out.

-

The next morning she wakes up at a hospital, feeling a bit dizzy she sees a nurse is putting a new bag on the IV and a detective and a cop sitting besides her.

"Ah so you've awaken, how do you feel?" asked the detective.

"I feel a bit dizzy, but..where am I" asked Liz

"It seems that you blacked out my dear, you're at the hospital"

"Oh...."

"Also do you happen to remember what happened yesterday?" asked the detective

Liz started to get the flashing images of her brother's death and her father's abandonment, she starts to feel anxious, the nurse sits next to her putting her arm over her shoulder, comforting her. She tells the detective

"I don't it's best to ask her this right now, don't force her, let her take her time"

"Very well then, you're right and I'm sorry" says the detective then he pulls out a card

"Here is my card my number is right there, if need to talk to someone you can call me and we can chat ok? Feel better my dear" then he leaves.  

The doctor comes in and checks up on Liz

"How are you feeling?"

"I'm fine"

"That's good to hear, I also have something else to tell you, we weren't able to contact your father or find him, I'm sorry"

Liz just looks down

"We're going to have put you in a foster home, I hope you understand"

Liz wasn't too disappointed about it and she accepted.

And now she is put into a foster family.  

Years gone by, she is now 12 years old, Liz's personality changed. She became more bold, bitter and is more quiet. She doesn't want to play with the other kids, so she's usually just by herself. Liz and her foster mother have a good bond, she loves Liz and comforts her when she is feeling mentally ill, and even buys her gifts. The other kids eventually starts to get jealous of her and now they just ignore her but she is happy that she has a mother that she never had, she is the only person that she was kind and sweet to.


Liz goes to a catholic school whom everyone seems to be freaked out by her, they don't talk to her and keep their distance away from her.

During Lunch, she accidentally bumps into a boy and the boy pushes her and she falls to the ground and tells her

"Hey watch where you're going you freak!"

That triggers Liz's memory about her father, she starts to hear the voices in her head again, she starts kicking and yelling, everyone was surprised.
The school nurse arrives with a wheelchair and takes her to the nurse's office, they call her foster mother to come and pick her up.

Liz has been absent from school since the little incident she had, when she goes back, everybody just stares at her. She simply just ignores them.

During lunchtime, she begins to remember her past about her brother, all the memories of them together, she sheds a little tear.

"Oh how I miss you my dear brother...."

The school bell rings

It was time for class

Everyone is in class waiting for their teacher who hasn't shown up yet, they waited about 10 minutes and the principal comes in and informs the class that their teacher had food poisoning and had to go home, so they have a substitute for today and leaves.

The substitute comes in and takes over

During class time, the same boy that she bumped into Liz starts throwing paper balls at her head, irritating her, but she tried to control herself, she started to form her hands into fists
"Control yourself....don't let it get to you....just ignore him" said Liz in her head.

10 minutes till the end of school, the substitute announces that everybody has free time. Liz started to draw sitting at the corner of the class room, alone.

"Students, I have somewhere that I need to be it's a bit of an emergency, enjoy the rest of the class" says the sub, then she leaves.

The boy comes up to Liz

"Hey, you know why you're alone all the time?" asked the boy with a smile on his face

"I'd rather be alone than be friends with people like you" said Liz

The boy gets upset and he yells at her

"IT'S BECAUSE YOU'RE A FREAK! Everybody doesn't like you, they always talk about how creepy you are"

Liz's eye twitches and tells him to go away, anger was building up inside of her. The boy then goes to his group of friends and they all point at her, and started singing

"Freak, freak, freak, you are such a fre-eak, no wonder no-one likes youuu"

Liz then suddenly starts shaking in frustration, grinding her teeth, both of her hands at the sides of her head getting chucks of her hair. Everyone joined them.

"STOP IT!" shouts Liz

The boy says "It's no wonder you're a foster kid, your real parents must have also thought you were a freak!"

Everybody starts to laugh at her

She snaps, and throws a chair at the boy, it hit right at his face and he collapse on the floor, she starts running towards him and starts to choke him yelling "I AM GOING TO FUCKING KILL YOU, YOU LITTLE SHIT" she picks up the boy and throws him into a crowd of kids and knocks them all over. Causing a big scene. She goes after whoever is close to her, hitting them, scratching them, lashing out and trying to hurt as many of these hurtful children as possible.

Someone runs out and calls for a teacher, the teacher runs in and grabs Liz from behind. The school security guard runs in and takes away Liz.

The security guard struggling to restrain Liz, he takes her to the principal's office, the foster mom is already there in tears, when Liz sees her she calms down and has a sad expression on her face, besides the foster mom, there is man wearing a lab coat and his assistant was there. The security guard lets go of Liz and the principal dismisses him

The principal then says

"Ah, this is the child I was talking about Doctor Smith, Liz, this is Dr. Smith, he is a professional doctor and he takes care of patients with mental illnesses"

"Liz, how very nice to meet you"

he then reached out his hand for a handshake but Liz just slaps his hand out of the way and looks to the side.

"Feisty aren't we, hehe. Yes, we've been informed that you've been having problems such as having attacks, and also....threatening to kill and causing violence? Am I correct" says the Doctor

Liz looks down

"Don't worry I'm here to help you recover, I've worked with patients such as yourself"

Liz: "So you think I'm a freak like everyone else"

Doctor Smith: "No, not at all my dear, you just need some time to recover and you'll be all better"

Principal: "You see Liz, he works at Saint Michael's Sanitarium. He's worked with many people just like yourself. We figured it best that you get medical treatment before you hurt yourself or anyone else."

Liz: "I'm not going, I'm fine the way I am, mom you're are not going to let them take me right?"

The foster mother looks down and cries

Principal: "We asked your mother for permission to take you to the sanitarium and get you treated, and she agreed to do so"

Liz looks at her foster mother

Liz: "But why, how could you do this..."

Foster Mom: "I'm sorry..."

Liz: "I hate you, I HATE YOU"

She was about to smack her foster mother until the assistant grabs her wrist

Assistant: "There is no need to do that, she is doing this because she loves you"

Liz was growling giving a death glare at the assistant then she her face turns sad

she said softly

Liz: "Ok......I'll go with you guys

End of part 1
the title says it all. 

This story has 2 parts, one part is about her past and the 2nd part is about how she became a monster.  

I'm not much of a writer, so this is the first time for me. 

Feedback will be much appreciated!~ 

-MindFreak
© 2015 - 2024 xxxMind-Freakxxx
Comments2
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Samuel-Kingsley's avatar
ahhh so many feels~ you did a good job on this ;w;